In order to replicate Take a Break's natural images used in their articles, I have taken all of my shots in natural locations. Such as in a home, in a garden and in a park. To ensure that my article was realistic, in showing a woman returning to her family after prison, I have taken images of a real family. This allowed the two young boys to be at ease whilst I was taking photographs as they were with their parents. Thus creating natural photographs, which is what I intended.
Friday, 27 March 2015
Article Content
Take a Break is a woman's weekly magazine and largely attracts it audience through the use of real life stories by normal everyday women and not celebrities. In order to fully replicate the codes and conventions of Take a Break, the use of language and content must be relevant and correct.
The situation I intend to create is an article based on a women who has been released from a prison in England, who has now returned to her family. Within the article the woman will be talking about all of her experiences in there, and how she has become a better person from learning from her experiences in prison. The article will be in first person, coming from the women. This is due to the magazines articles always being in first person so readers know they are getting told the story exactly how the person involved intended it to be told.
- Brief subheading at the beginning of the article, to highlight and outline what the article is going to be about
- Quotes from the people involved in the story, to add to the narrative
- Key events and factual information
- Images of the people involved, again to aid the narrative
The situation I intend to create is an article based on a women who has been released from a prison in England, who has now returned to her family. Within the article the woman will be talking about all of her experiences in there, and how she has become a better person from learning from her experiences in prison. The article will be in first person, coming from the women. This is due to the magazines articles always being in first person so readers know they are getting told the story exactly how the person involved intended it to be told.
Article Draft
Headline:
They say home is where the heart is
Subheading:
Whilst I was serving my sentence, my boys had to adjust to life without me. By Jillian Page, 33
Article:
After committing to my three year sentence, I have completely missed out on my boys’ childhood. The last time I saw them, Leo and Aiden, before I had to hand myself in, I bent down and whispered to them both ‘You both are my world. Mummy will be back for you soon!’ With one last glance at my gorgeous boys, my husband wiped the tears that were streaming down my face, and then I turned to leave my world behind me.
Every morning at 6am, a guard would come into our dorms and order us to report to the main hall immediately. Once in the main hall, all prisoners had to partake in a morning exercise routine. The routine was similar to one you would expect in a military organisation. Once again, if anybody was found not partaking in the routine, major consequences would be taken into consideration and you would be thrown into isolation. Isolation was a place in which a prisoner would be locked away even more than they already are. The time that a prisoner would spend in isolation was unknown to them and was only decided by higher authorities a few days after they had been put in there. Thankfully, I never had to experience isolation, as I always obeyed the rules of the guards.
Three years later, I am now free. I was released six
months ago and life could not be any better. After spending some well-earned
time with my boys, I am content. I am
now pregnant again, and will be giving birth to our precious baby girl later on
this year. Being a prisoner was one of the most traumatic experiences of my
life. I am now a different person and nothing will ever change that.
They say home is where the heart is
Subheading:
Whilst I was serving my sentence, my boys had to adjust to life without me. By Jillian Page, 33
Article:
After committing to my three year sentence, I have completely missed out on my boys’ childhood. The last time I saw them, Leo and Aiden, before I had to hand myself in, I bent down and whispered to them both ‘You both are my world. Mummy will be back for you soon!’ With one last glance at my gorgeous boys, my husband wiped the tears that were streaming down my face, and then I turned to leave my world behind me.
As we pulled up to prison, my husband, Gary, held and
squeezed my hand. ’The time will fly by, you’ll be home in no time babe’. I
took his words as a comfort and reminded myself of them every single day that I
was in there.
Before leaving, Gary pulled me close and kissed me on the
forehead. With his last words being ‘I will come and see you next week. You’ll
be absolutely fine. I promise you.’
Prison was exactly what I thought it would be. Groups of
women that had been there for the past several years, with their friendship
groups as strong as them. I knew I was going to struggle to fit it. I was
surrounded by many of the nation’s most evil female offenders. I had never felt
so alone and frightened in all of my life. I was so disappointed in myself for
letting all of my boys down and that this is what my life had now become.
During my time in prison, I had never felt so unfeminine. Showers were cut down
to three minutes each, which was barely any time to have a proper wash. Not only that, but all make up
was contraband and if found, the consequences were severe and you would be
severely punished. Hair was scrapped back into a tight bun so it would not get
in the way of our activities during our
day.
Every morning at 6am, a guard would come into our dorms and order us to report to the main hall immediately. Once in the main hall, all prisoners had to partake in a morning exercise routine. The routine was similar to one you would expect in a military organisation. Once again, if anybody was found not partaking in the routine, major consequences would be taken into consideration and you would be thrown into isolation. Isolation was a place in which a prisoner would be locked away even more than they already are. The time that a prisoner would spend in isolation was unknown to them and was only decided by higher authorities a few days after they had been put in there. Thankfully, I never had to experience isolation, as I always obeyed the rules of the guards.
Article Design
To ensure that all of my article is similar to the ones featured in the magazine, I have created an advertisement that is always present at the bottom of their articles. In addition to this I have also created captions for the photographs in my article, an isolated quotation and a capitalised letter for the beginning of the article.
Wednesday, 25 March 2015
Contact Sheet
My first location shoot was in photography studio, to take photographs of my model for the front cover of my magazine. Whilst I was on location, I also took a photograph of another one of my models that would feature on the front cover, in one of my smaller articles that would feature in the magazine.
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